Lil_Pau

Your username reminds me of milkshakes. o.o Sounds random, but yeah... I like your avvie though :D

Why?

I love owls.

Hey there! I thought this was not bad. I like the imagery in the poem, especially when you compare stars with fireflies. Every ten seconds my reborn shadow fades, I ...

Hey there! I liked this. It's short, but I like the way it was written. It made me envision a fantasy world. (xD) One little nitpick: You will fly tonight; ...

Haha, this is really cute, it made me smile :D. Children's stories rule! Anyway, keep the chapters coming! ^^

Hey there! :) I like this poem. It's written in a simplistic style, but there's some good imagery there. It had a good start and a good end. :) There ...

Back in 5th grade, I was involved in a fight with this large boy. He was from this gang of boys from another class, and he and the other gang ...

1. If you had to admit you were an expert in one thing, what would it be? Eating 2. Does this subject fit into the category of Food? Yep =) ...

Hey there, I'm here to review your poem. Have you ever used it? No? me either Then what is the point to adobe reader? It's supposed to be A dobe ...

Hey Lumierre! I have to admit, this was really well written. The whole message was very clear, very strong too, and the flow was all right. Just one little nitpick: ...

Sure! Anything more than 30 but less than 100 would be fine with me :D

Beat It :D

Sit in an elevator for two days with a person who talked non-stop Would you rather sit in a tank of cockroaches or a tank of expired milk?

You look through the eyepiece of life, allowing memories, dark and golden, to encrust your irises. Measuring the length of your current lifeline, you find many curves and angles, and ...