Lil_Pau

Hey guys, thanks for the reviews! I've edited the story. :) Looks like I'll have to write that 2nd part...oh well...:P

Hi Evi! Can you please review my story here? It's in the fantasy fiction forum. It's for a contest, so I just want a review so that if there are ...

My eyes flew open. The speed of my heart thumping increased as I realized I was in a dark, seemingly empty place. I heard nothing, except the tip-tap of trickling ...

Can't stand them anymore. Especially the fangirls xP. Jonas Brothers = for Disney marketing

Hi there! I actually liked this poem. It was simple, but straight to the point, and had a whimsical feeling. What's more, I'm glad that it was a from the ...

Well, my whole family knows that I can write, but for some reason, I am usually reluctant to show my work to them as well. I don't know feels strange ...

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Sounds like it'll be about some sort of journey. I'll pick it up to read the blurb. If it's interesting enough, I might read the 1st chapter! :) Goddess

Wow, not bad! I like your use of a 'china doll' as a metaphor. Quite unique. :) You broke me like a china doll, Released me from your clutch. Watched ...

Sounds like a psychological thriller...or with a bit of horror. I'd pick it up to read the blurb. :P Geist Link

Yes, it's true. When I was younger, I heard 'Bring Me To Life' by Evanescence and strangely, I liked the song so much that I even managed to create a ...

That's true. The media has ruined many others' lives. By reporting 'false' things and spreading rumours about other people, it's almost the same as cyber bullying. How many people have ...

I was asleep when my mum jolted me up and told me the news. That time the TV was switched on to CNN, and while watching the news of MJ, ...

It sounds like either a modern thriller/horror type or a story of someone struggling in life. I'll just read the blurb. Sunfire Chronicles

"Erm...just gather up my best friends and go out to a good restaurant." - Karuna "Host a great party, with lots of balloons, people...and cake!" - Direly "Yes, I'll host ...