Lil_Pau

Because The World Turned Upside Down. (Coldplay) Do you believe in yourself?

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What a horrible, shocking tragedy. My heart sincerely goes out to them. Watching all the devastation on the news is just heartbreaking, seeing the water flow over the fields and ...

I see the sun rise in the water, but it does not rise in the sky. Water - so much water - comes to my feet. The rondo begins; there's ...

Like the title, it's a simple song, but very meaningful. The lyrics convey their message wonderfully, and the whole arrangement actually fits the song. I love this, poor audio quality ...

Hey there! Nice job here. I like the medieval era fantasy-like feel of this poem. Nitpicks: Broken table, how the Seer wishes to greet thee, At your doorstep on bended ...

Winter laces the hands of the skinny, dry guardians along the dust and leaf-lined street; a gust picks up pace and sweeps the pavement clean, a natural community worker or ...

Awesome work Lily! :D I love the format of the whole poem. Only- Without the biggest baddest members, Rina and Meshie, Fire and Nate Here, this feels unfinished. You just ...

Haven't done anything in quite a while...this was actually for an assignment. Enjoy! ______________________________________________________________________________________ 50 balloons drift upwards in

I liked this, especially the structure and the simplicity of the poem. There was nothing forced, nothing exaggerated, something I usually see in these types of poems. Nitpicks: Underneath my ...

Hey there! I thought this poem was quite nice. I like the imagery in here. Nitpicks: Shouldering the ivy which is keeping it warm. You can just put 'Shouldering the ...

I stepped into the pool of moonlight and curled up in my shell, breathing in scents of night, starlight and human Lilies danced fervently in the wind, as if they ...

Hey! I thought this was rather lovely. It was short, simple and sweet. Lil' nitpicks: We’re falling over our heartstrings laid out like tripwires, waiting for us with sinister smiles. ...

'If I'm not back in five minutes, just wait longer!' ~ Ace Ventura, Ace Ventura : Pet Detective

Never marry or love or date at all. :( Would you rather kiss a tarantula or stand in a box full of frogs on bare feet?