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Re: Night Order and Day Chaos
They've arrived. You've been waiting for this day. Dreading it or hoping for it, you're not really sure. And yet... they're here now - waiting outside of your room for ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: The Lamirghetta (started)
Ooo! Can I join? It's been so long since I've been in an SB, I'm not even sure I have any original characters to make up any more! :D Name: ...
Sep 8, 2010 -
Re: Broken Window
Oh, god, in response to this poem (I had to write it, I'm so very sorry): My window may look so very clear, it may look perfect and pretty, like ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Elizabeth Andrews school of the unknown - chapter two
Okay, I feel like deconstructing this bit by painful bit. Bear with me while I go through this, and I apologise beforehand for any cruel comments. But first, the pleasantries ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Lost (Gone From Here)
Gosh, I'm not even sure what to say about this. It gives me such odd images in my head. I've seen it in the un-reviewed part for some time and ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Time Continues On
Hey Squidikle :D Hopefully, the rhyming doesn't sound too forced. It does a bit, but that can't be helped, considering the fact that you wrote this to rhyme. *Cuffs you ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Time Continues On
Feelings of love grow ice cold, < I think you should take out crystal, it reads better without it...> Logic freezing the mind, uncontrolled They shatter, the glad memories of ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Time Continues On
Awesome! Thanks for the review! And I thought it was a little too long, but I wasn't too sure. Thank you again! :D
Aug 20, 2010 -
Re: Time Continues On
Footsteps in the sand fade away, as night will always dwindle into day, for bodies, once so alive, will decay, and life will forever shrivel into death, but Time continues ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Hindsight 20/20
I'm not sure why, but this poem made me cry. Like literally, my tears flowing freely. I feel so sad and lost after reading it. It's mostly because that's how ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Hi I'm the Truth
You know what? You should do the same thing as the Confessional did. Post your password so people can write what they want without feeling guilty about it. Here - ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: (Break Free)
Okay, guys, the explanation is at the bottom. So feel free to read and comment as you will. :D I’m trying to break free, (A poor sparrow, me, wishes to ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: C'est la vie (Jaz & Jai) Not Accepting (yet)
The daemon, Eruo Viator, curled on her shoulder, its tail coiled around her right arm like a snake, "Missstresss, I do believe it'ssss your move now." The Lady smiled slightly, ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Riddled with Liars.
Just a note. The word "liar" in your title is spelt right . (Also, you seem to have three variations of the word - liar, lyar and lyer.)
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Clockwork Heart
Setji Setji rolled his eyes at the scream. He had wanted to go right. He sighed and turned around to look at the girl being attacked by another mutant thing. ...
Jun 26, 2010
