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Re: Sonnet: For the Neighbor Kid
It's very good. However, i think you might have slightly killed the enjambment. Too much of a good thing can be bad. And is it me or do you seem ...
Dec 3, 2008 -
Re: Love
[pre]The sky to me appears to be ablaze. With flames that can ignite the very soul. And love, within the soul can stir a daze So pure that if in ...
Mar 11, 2008