LifeUnknown

I really don't have a critique for this poem. But I would like to say that I really enjoyed the lines: It doesn't live in the dark, It doesn't hide ...

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Thank you as well, I'll take this and make my work better. I really appreciate this.

Thank you.

Thank you, I'll look it over and make it better. I really appreciate this.