LibraLoo

This is the story I'm writing for NaNoWriMo, so advice is much appreciated!If it's too long then I'll cut it down. Heidi Maybelline Monroe is an idiot. There’s no doubt ...

I like the script at the beginning. Very original. I'm not very good at constructive critism either, so I'm just going to say it was very good xD The title ...

I just finished reading Andromeda Klein by Frank Portman. He's one of my favorite authors ever since I read King Dork. I haven't related to a book so much since ...

xD People on here write the best Twilight parodies. I love yours too. I like when Edward shoots Bella. I made me laugh so hard I almost fell out of ...

xD People on here write the best Twilight parodies. I love yours too. I like when Edward shoots Bella. I made me laugh so hard I almost fell out of ...

Ouch. That's really sad D: Other than that, this is really good. I can sort of relate to the MC because I've had friends who go through this type of ...

I've actually been on this site for a while, but haven't been writing because of school. Anyway! My name is Cassie and I'm a sophmore in high school. My favorite ...

Here it is! I've accidentally read your story without reading the first chapter xD No wonder I was so confused! Sorry, dear! Keep writing!

This sounds really awesome :D Aiden seems like an interesting character and I like Kiersten too. This is like those coming-of-age stories I like so much. Could you PM me ...

This is my first year actually trying NaNoWriMo, and I'm really excited! I usually wait till after school to write because I think of a lot of great things to ...

I really like it so far. I want to see where your going with all of this. Rose seems like an interesting characters, and I would like to see her ...

Wow. This is really good! I can really relate to the main character too. The flow of the story was wicked awesome. I want to read it again :D

Twist!! I love that! I really thought Steven was dead xD Poor Callie. She's being put through all this crazy stuff! She didn't know they were vampires before? Oh well! ...

Yah! Steven is nutty-crazy-insane xD I'm really intrigued by his character. Does he have some sort of personality dysfuntion going on? I feel bad for Andrew D: It's kind of ...

Interesting :D I liked how you put all this stuff in the prolouge so that I'll HAVE to read the rest to figure out what's going on! I normally don't ...