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Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three
Hi! I'm Teardrop. First of all, I really like this so far. I think you have an awesome plot going on, keep it up. "Closeing" from the title does not ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Teenager's World
Well, First, I need more detail to give a full review. Minor grammer mistakes. All I can really say is MORE DETAIL. Describe more about how the MC(Main Character) looks. ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three
Hi Libby! I'm here to review the third chapter of Closing The Door On My Past. : D I'll start with nitpicks. She stood up. Just to be safe, I ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Too everybody that commented showing their support: THANKS! Like foreal. I did this poem a long time ago! & Just decided to post it. Thanks again. Keep liking this people. ...
Oct 15, 2010 -
Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three
"I'm getting the rest of my stuff and leaving," I said bluntly. My mother stood up quickly. I grabbed a hold of B.J.'s hand , guiding him into my room ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby here to review (:, I must say I really liked this. The slang & spelling errors give it voice, they make it feel real. It has so much ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
LibbyLovesDrumswrote: AsxLoversxGo wrote: At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
At first I was getting annoyed with the spelling errors and then I noticed that you had said they were only for style. Then the poem suddenly got sadder. It ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: True Love
This really touches you in the soft spot. I love this poem because it shows the true love and dedication for a person! It's short but I love how the ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Music Of War!
I LOVED the vibe this poem gave off. It was a peaceful, yet shocking feeling. I can't seem to explain it but I think poems touch people in different ways. ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: A Bed of Roses
Tell me that I'll be yours forever,then leave me before forever's done.For, how can anything lastwhen nothing lasts forever? I like it because it makes you think like ? "Yooo, ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: To My Guardian Angel
For those of you who read my work know that I lost somebody I love so much. This is for you Babe. (Spelling errors are just for style.) Check out ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: What we used to be.
Loved it! I seen minor grammer errors that basically everybody pointed out! =)
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Pretty Random Photography.
nice photos! I approve! That winter one reminds me of winter back home *sighs*. Wish I hadn't moved. Keep snapping and happy snapping! *clicks like a million times on the ...
Sep 26, 2010
