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Re: Missing You
Please don’t let me down again, Don’t ever break my heart, Now that you’re locked up in there, My world has fallen apart. You were what made me happy, What ...
May 10, 2005 -
Re: (Deleted).
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May 10, 2005 -
Re: Missing You
You couldn’t possibly know, How much you mean to me, That I’d give everything I had, For you to be set free, That each and every day, I miss you ...
Apr 25, 2005 -
Re: You
Thanks for the comments.. & yes, I agree, I could probably do without rhyming, but for some reason.. I stink even worse at non-rhyming poetry. (Lol). Well, thank you all ...
Apr 21, 2005 -
Re: You
You took my perfect picture, And tore it all apart, Reached inside my chest, And crushed my precious heart. Opened up my mind, To things I never knew, Letting all ...
Apr 21, 2005 -
Re: Little Girl
Didn't even realize this title was so similar to something else I wrote.. Lol.
Apr 3, 2005 -
Re: Little Girl
Little girl, why must you leave? You’re far too young, Far too naïve. Listen as I beg and plead, Little girl, just stay with me! Little girl, you need not ...
Apr 3, 2005 -
Re: The Secret Keeper
Deep within the corner of your mind, Scattered amongst childhood memories, Hidden behind useless knowledge, Alongside your greatest fears, Fitted around wishes and dreams, Is a secret. A secret, so ...
Mar 7, 2005 -
Re: In Pain, We Learn
Well... uhh thanks for all the comments, I guess? Actually. Scratch that. Thanks for most of them, but as for the one's that are all about 'ripping it to pieces' ...
Mar 4, 2005 -
Re: In Pain, We Learn
Wow - thank you so much! I'm touched..
Feb 23, 2005 -
Re: In Pain, We Learn
The days grow short, The moments end, Good friends still lie, Nice boys pretend, To be so sweet, To be so nice, Lives waste away, Aimed at suffice. Time goes ...
Feb 21, 2005 -
Re: Morning
You had a few good details, but after reading it, the only thoughts I had were questions... I wanted to know more... to know why it happened, who/what did it, ...
Feb 21, 2005 -
Re: Trying
Nice. You know, I usually like rhyming poems... but this is one non-rhyming poem that I definately liked. It was simple, not confusing or over dramatic, and it hit home. ...
Feb 20, 2005 -
Re: Memory
Lol - It's totally okay. Anyways, I get what your saying.. Completely. It was really supposed to be talking about highschool, since I am sixteen, but I didn't say that. ...
Feb 19, 2005 -
Re: Memory
These are the times of our lives, they say, The best days that we’ll ever see. & no matter how many years pass us by, We’ll still have our beloved ...
Feb 19, 2005
