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I cradle the bottle between my fingers, casually hitting a cigarette as I lose myself in a cloud of dizziness and smoke. I don’t smoke cigarettes much; I’m not a ...

She spent her days in a constant daze with Thoughts of hearts and hands grazing a guitar She could no longer hear the music but She sang his lyrics loudly ...

I sink into my sheets at night In my silent shadowed room Another day completed Left with lonely thoughts of you I picture you, you’re playing Fingers grazing a guitar ...

All comments are appreciated, and sorry for my little 'rant' at the beginning of the piece.. I was half kidding and partially trying to get a point across. I loveeee ...

K - Screw everything you know about reading a real "poem" and try reading the words for what they are.. because this is more of a.. Freestyle? Yepp. Written by ...

I made a few of the corrections, I seriously appreciate every comment. Thanks again!

1. Fact preceding fiction, she was sweet seventeen and straight from the bottle ‘golden blonde’. Almond eyes, counterfeit complexion, lip gloss layered lips. Slender hips hidden beneath layers of

She was broken promises and untold lies, Lip glossed joints and lush liquor highs Swallowed tears and silent cries Genuinely happy (In an artificial way) Mouthfuls of goodbye, Lips lined ...

Thank you SO much for the comments!

Come closer: Hear my secret, Promise not to tell A single soul. I’ve got a million pretty words And absolutely no control Over what may slip from this Lip gloss ...

Hey, thanks for the comment! Anyways, for "Mirror", I'm trying to say that she is beautiful.. but she doesn't realize it, because she is preoccupied with all of the 'flaws' ...

Mirror: Before the mirror upon the wall, A princess sits with saddened eyes, The truth’s displayed before her, But she’s preoccupied with lies. Her imperfections linger, Before her drop-dead gorge

And she’s reaching for a feeling She can’t see and never knew before, Getting hurts her habit, But it’s so much harder to ignore, Her painful heart beating, It’s aching ...

I’m living the moment, The moment is now. I loudly applaud, as you take a bow. You’re a marvelous actor, You’re great at pretend, A romance with a tragedy end. ...

Yeah, it started out as a rap.. Haha.. That's what most of everything I write begins as.. Thanks for the comments guys, I'll work on it! (Oh, and the full ...