LexiconDevil

Wow. That was scary. I think the build up was pretty well-done--but the build up itself wasn't scary to me, really. I think the ending with the description of the ...

Well, just wondering, do you have any other names instead of "master" that I should use? Should I perhaps use the mans actual name, or perhaps a name that the ...

I don’t know or care how bad your life is. Mine is worse. Want to know why? I live in Cade, the most backwards, out of the way ‘city’ this ...

The warm, fragrant air of my home wades throughout my nose. This sentence would work if it weren't for the "throughout my nose" bit. "Throughout" makes it sound like it's ...

I was 13. I hated writing in elementary school; I dreaded having to write journal entries and I always gave half the effort when it came to an assignment we ...

Despite the stalker following her, Hilary York was feeling unusually optimistic. "Despite the stalker following her" is confusing. It suggests that currently, someone is following her right at that mo

The instructor for this particular practice, Instructor Haldan(...) I notice that you don't really use his name that much, but instead call him "the instructor." Just as a rule of ...