LexiconDevil

Tentatively joining. I'm scared school might get in the way, but 1.6k a day isn't that bad. I've never finished a novel before, so I'm hoping it'll help with my ...

If you want to set it in the middle ages, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE do research. Inaccuracies do add up, and they don't ever reflect well on your story. Here's how ...

Thank you for reviewing my story. Here's where I return the favor. :] It was a lonely day of ninety-two degrees. This sentence works well in that we understand what ...

Thanks everyone for the reviews. They are highly appreciated. And to all those who don't know, Halloween has its roots in a Celtic festival for Samhain, the festival being considered ...

Sure, make certain your not offending anyone too much but what people (in general) need to remember is that this is fiction. Tell it how you want to tell it. ...

The streets were quiet, too quiet. You know who says this a lot? Bugs Bunny. That's whose voice said that in my head. It's not exactly a good start for ...

Honestly, my first impression is that it annoys me. Maybe if I saw how it worked with how the rest of the story would look I can judge it better, ...

Thanks, was nice to get your opinion. I think I get your point about needing to suggest that Luke has changed somehow, I sort of hint at it but its ...

First looking at your description of the highway, I sort of wonder... yeah, and? Like I'm not sure why it's being described to us. You don't make the highway interesting, ...

In the center of the impregnable comet there was only one thing, Nulia Tedesicon, the bravest and most feared hunter in all the hills above and beyond. Show us this, ...

Lord. I only noticed now that I double-posted. Sorry about that.

I've had someone else look over this for me, so this is a revised version you're looking at. I'm mostly looking for feedback on whether or not you feel compelled ...

Come on now, you can give us more than that! At least 1k words, remember. If you strived to make this the shortest short story ever, you should make your ...

yes, i get what you mean. i suppose i could change the name for copyright's sake, but it will always be rydia in my head. i wasn't planning on getting ...

I personally always start with characters. Everything else usually builds around them. I just can't imagine starting with plot--and whenever I do try to start with plot, I usually lose ...