Lexicalized

Lonesome Blue Night ©2007 Lexicalized. It’s a Friday night, Got nothing to do; Just lyin’ here, sittin’ here Thinkin’ ‘bout you. It’s a Friday night, Got no one to see. ...

Ditto the guy above me on the length issue. I definately think you dragged it out too long. That is, however, quite fixable. I do think it was a good ...

It's a pretty good poem, but I agree, you should elaborate a little more. Filll it out. Complete the thought. I really like the first two stanzas. One specific suggestion ...

Very good, very good. I agree with the others, the rhythm, at times, threw me a little. There were a couple times when it was kind of stop/start, stop/start. It ...

I'd have to agree with the first two replies to your work-I think you should lengthen it, expound further on the idea. But I really do like the idea (especially ...

I watch you standing there With longing, wistful eyes If you knew what I was thinking, I think you’d be surprised. Because I bet you didn’t know That I dream ...

Greetings my friends, So, my username is Lexicalized, but my real name is Alexis. Feel free to call me Lex or Lexie or...heck, whatever you feel like calling me. :wink: ...