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Re: Dream Walker
Some one plz comment!!! i have to make thiss longer otherwise it doesn't count. frowny face. plz plz give me a comment sorry i'm being kinda pushy but i really ...
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Re: Dream Walker
Some one pleese comment i kneed to know what to do!!!!
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Re: The Secret
I like the lack of formal words. Somehow it sounds more genuin and makes it seem more realistic. keep it up. i dissagree i think elves are just fine. i ...
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Re: Dream Walker
If I did make it longer it would be right before "Fire"? what do you think? let me know. Dream Walker Prologue There are some things I wish I never ...
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Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
thanks for the ideas. I like them but I think i'm gonna keep it once younc. because it's not literal meaning the person/vampire is young in body. it's ment to ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: The Vampire and the victim
I loved it. i think it was really good and I liked that you had a lot of detail, but next time leave someout so the reader can imagin it. ...
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Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
thanks Bunnie that's my favorite part too!!!
May 10, 2009 -
Re: In the life of vampires
Name: Tristan Gender: male Age:17 Species: shape shifter Back round/ appearance: black hair, green eyes, 5'11'', and slightly goth. Lives with blind father who doesn't know he shapeshifts. High potent
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Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
I really should remember to capitolize them lol I'm not to good at it. I'l never get it why A's aren't cappitolized and I's are. Does any body know? Am ...
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Re: Fire and Ice
i liked it. it was a little strange. i think it needs an intro maybe something about falling asleep or drifting away from reality? ps. i love all things random.
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Re: Geek Moments
i have so many but this is the funniest. i was reading a book and my bff came over and asked me if i could spell check something. i was ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: My angel
i liked it . Ift was verry realistic and made me feel like i was there. i like the way you oppen with the comparison between tears and rain i ...
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Re: Shadows in the Sunlight
Shadows in the Sunlight Who am I if I never know love? If I roam the earth and never go home? If I drink, though never calm my thirst? If ...
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Re: The Angel's Lullaby
omg i love it! it's kinda funny 'cause I'm reading a book about Guardian angles called Kissed by an Angle. Maybe you read it? it's a good book so far.
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Re: Shakespeare Insults
ugh i had this whole thing typed up then i messed it up. I'm no good with computers. i have no clue what I'm doing i just really like to ...
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