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Re: Dragons
The last part is a mess up. Dragons will always be in our dreams told in countless stories and will truly real to those who believe.
May 30, 2007 -
Re: Dragons
A mysterious and magical cretaure, comes to us in dreams and stories always eluding us. Breating elegant and majestic fire that will incinerate anything in it's destructive path. Scales that ...
May 30, 2007 -
Re: From the Earth to the Unknown
My first attempt at a Sci-Fi story, so I might be good at it. Earth June 5, 2458 “When I was young I wished and I hoped to live in ...
May 26, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy Ch.2-3 for those who missed them
I'm posting this for the people who didn't know the people who liked to read on in my story, but thought that the others were still Ch 1. Sorry about ...
Apr 20, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy Ch.4
Chapter 4 I woke up early in the morning, in the house both Scado and Nicarga were killed. I still didn’t really enjoy allying with the Vampire, but if what ...
Apr 18, 2007 -
Re: Wizard-Chapter 1
I agree with the others on what they said, and I also agree that you should try to make it longer (I like long chapters). I will look for it ...
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: World Vision. (Credited)
It was intresting and kind of spooky, I would probably continue it if the next chapter (or chapters) catch my attention. Add to here surrondings what did the room she ...
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: The Griffinkeeper
I didn't think it was in the category of Fantasy till it got to the egg. But all in all I would give it thumbs up and say you should ...
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy
Chapter 3 I looked around and saw a man with a black cloak, and I knew him by those red bloodshot eyes, the Vampire. “Ah, you remember me, and I ...
Apr 16, 2007 -
Re: Dragon Fire
Dragon Fire Chapter 1 Beginnings In the early morning hours, with the smell of saltwater in the air, Nasaru was shaken awake by his father Gano. “Wah!” yelled Nasaru as ...
Mar 27, 2007 -
Re: Dragons' Legend
“Dragons, fantasy or reality? That’s the question cryptozoologists have been trying to prove, but only met dead ends by reality. Can there be a creature who is not an insect ...
Mar 21, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy
Please if you're reading this please critique. I can only make this an awsmoe story with a few of your suggestions.
Mar 17, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy
My muscles tensed , I took a quick look around and saw people carrying torches. I kept on hiding up on a sturdy branch. Trying not make a sound and ...
Mar 15, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy
But I knew Scado wasn’t going without a fight. He dropped into a Lycan fighting stance, commonly all four paws, and he started a deep threatening growl which might have ...
Mar 15, 2007 -
Re: Lycanthropy
Please if you are reading this I seriuosly need you to critique this if you find mistakes. *gets on knees and beggs* please I beg you.
Mar 15, 2007
