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Re: Blood Moon: Chapter Two
In the second paragraph I think it would be best to describe the transformation and possibley what happens to her clothes when she transforms. I know how tough this can ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Ch1 Part 2
It was two days after Orlam walked onto that shore towards the Tree of Likon to talk to The Wolf, Lethero, his big brother. Lethero was twenty when Orlam was ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Blood Moon: Chapter One
First off, Werewolves Rule!!!!! Ok, to business, the story needs more description like where is this school and what do Zachary and James look like besides their heigth, what are ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: "My Book" (preface)
I'm not one into Vampires (I'm a Werewolf), but this story was good. I think the others caught most of the same things I did, so I really have nothin' ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 of (Untitled)
I only caught one thing the others over looked. “Yes Mam ” he whispered hotly turning to go back to his room. The bolded word is supposed to be Ma'am. ...
Jan 9, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Ch 1
Here is the second half to part 1. Enjoy Last time he meet The Wolf his fur was black as pitch and he wanted to discuss something with Orlam’s job. ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: Pretenders
Name: Lethero (duh) Age: 22 Race: Werewolf Description: Snow white fur with blood red eyes. Wears black clothing and carries a knife at his hip. Personality: Is a feirce fighter ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Ch 1
This yet another remake of mine. This most likely only going to be the first half of part one, so if you enjoy it please return to see the second ...
Jan 6, 2008 -
Re: Dragon Fire Remake
I've been redoing a lot of my stories and can never find one to stick to. Well, here is one of my oldest stories that I've been meaning to do. ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: The Others Remake
I am changing this from Chapter 1 part 1 to Prologue.
Dec 23, 2007 -
Re: The Others Remake
Here is the remake on my original story of The Others (not the SB). I gazed down at the brightly lit underground city from my perch on the top of ...
Dec 20, 2007 -
Re: The Animal Planet
*Might as well* Name: Gray Age: 4 Gender: Male Species: Arctic Wolf Description of Species: Is white and, well, likes the snow. Habitat: *Guess* The Arctic but is moving south ...
Dec 15, 2007 -
Re: The Others 2
I continued to glare at Ken from behind. Then from nowhere a dragon of unproportional size came from the sky and grabbed Geomana, stealing her away. It happened so fast ...
Dec 15, 2007 -
Re: His Dark Materials (Golden Compass)
Name: Ashton Age: 20 Sex: Male Dæmon Famaliar Name: Olyandra-White Wolf Tribe: Children Bio: Originally from Oxford and does silent studies of a friend with a panserbjorne named Iolosk Tyran. ...
Dec 10, 2007 -
Re: The Tales of Arc (Revised)
I found only one section wrong in here. "Of all the places he had to choose Ravea Territory , " Bellin thought, barely able to keep silent. The thought does ...
Dec 7, 2007
