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Re: Lycanthropy
This is what I guess is a Historical Fantasy. I'm using some historical events and people, but I am adding some of my own places, geographics features and all that. ...
Feb 8, 2008 -
Re: Sword of Truth
Can someone bring me in, please?
Feb 3, 2008 -
Re: Sword of Truth
His full name is Zeddicus Z'oll Zorander I believe. I guess I'll join. And they are not creatures. They're human beings like you and me but with abilities. Name: Irlam ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: Sword of Truth
His full name is Zeddicus Z'oll Zorander I believe. I guess I'll join. And they are not creatures. They're human beings like you and me but with abilities. Name: Ricahrd ...
Jan 31, 2008 -
Re: *Need Name* January 23, 2950 1400h Earth, Milky Way Galaxy
My *counts* third attempt at a Sci-Fi. This is actually a knock-off from my first one. I do need a name so if you have any, I'm open to suggestions. ...
Jan 30, 2008 -
Re: The Sleeper Chapter 1 Page 1
She stood up, slouching over as she stumbled towards the door, still dizzy with sleep, Nova trudged down the stairs, becoming more awake and aware with every thud of her ...
Jan 19, 2008 -
Re: Pretenders
Lethero stood there near the shore in the middle of the darkest part of night. To pass the time he manipulated the water and made it do simple tricks. All ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: A Fool's Hope
“Yes you will,” Thas says, unperturbed. “It all comes with practise .” It's practice. gold and white, the blue and ruby Try to replace this with something. It gets too ...
Jan 18, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Ch3
As always here's the other half. “Can I go?” Orlam asked. “Yes,” said the voice to his great surprise and relief. “You will be released into the city, but I ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Ch3
The truth begins to unfold. Orlam seemed to be waking up from a deep sleep. He opened his eyes slowly so they could adjust to the light. When they were ...
Jan 17, 2008 -
Re: Clueless
Man, Rubric beat me to grammar. Anyway, the only problem I had was the paragraphs. If you haven't noticed YWS does not include the indents to you want to space ...
Jan 16, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Chapter 2 Part 1
This is short I know, but I think this will end Ch2 so either look for Part 2 or Ch3. Not sure yet. "Isn't that what humans wanted?" Lethero said, ...
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: Magitech;Tales of Vlora
Vlora raced down the chrome narrow hallway, avoiding crows of civilians, bullets zooming past her body Did any bullets hit the civilians as she past them. I'm pretty sure bein' ...
Jan 15, 2008 -
Re: 12 Shocks of Xmas (pt. 3)
I didn't catch any grammar mistakes (seeing as you usually have to find mine). And overall this is a good story. I actually felt like I wanted to keep readin', ...
Jan 11, 2008 -
Re: Alpha Galaxy Chapter 2 Part 1
Yet again this is another half of a part, so check back for the other half. Lethero sat on a branch of a tree at the entrance of the base ...
Jan 11, 2008
