Lethero

Here's the edited version of the the original prologue. Otacon’s white lab cloak rustled in the light breeze, he pushed his glasses back into place and stared at the gravestone ...

I didn't find any thing that needs changes. It's a good story and I could somewhat understand what was goin' on even though I didn't read the previous chapters. Keep ...

Cool pictures. I like the cannons ;). Which fort is it. It's been so long sinced I lived in Florida that I forgot. Anyways I think they are great shots.....that's ...

I review fantasy and Sci-fi, but I'll review anything if you ask. I'm not good in poems or lyrics, but I'll try my best. Art & photography is ok. I ...

Review please. It's a fanfic, but I just need grammar mostly and anything else you can suggest.

*Lethero Senior will be my second character. His description is basically the same as Lethero Jr., but he is eighty something. History: One of the survivin' heros of the War. ...

Lethero arrived at his father's house only ten minutes after Ryder. He was just about to knock on the door when it was opened. His father stood in the doorway ...

"Ajle!" Lethero shouted. "The dragon who helped my father?" "Yes," Zel said. "She helped destroy the evil that threatened to start a genocide." He then looked away and stared into ...

"You are outside the town of Zeinta," Lethero said surprised by the strangers presence. "It is a town of Magical Creatures." "Would there be anyone by the name of Lethero ...

Tear it into pieces. Otacon’s white lab cloak rustled in the light breeze, he pushed his glasses back into place and looked at the gravestone before him. It was like ...

He feels he has walked this path before, Try: He felt as if he had walked this path before, which in turn holds his thin leggings. Try: which holds his ...

*I will post since Sylver isn't here.* "I am a Mazoku Demon." Ray said. "A Mazoku Demon?" Lethero asked. "I thought you guys weren't real." "We are as real as ...

*Ayumi, try to make your posts longer please. I am gettin' strict on post lengths to set an example for future chats. I don't mean to complain DW, but my ...

"Fight?" Lethero asked. "But this is an age of peace, there hasn't been major conflicts since my father stopped the hostilities between humans and Magical Creatures." "But I thought the ...

"You hear that, Lethero," Ryder said, "she can smell you a mile a away. You better start bathing." Moonie giggled and Lethero glared at Ryder. "Come on, Lethero, can't you ...