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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Lethero Sr. Zel landed lightly on the ground and crouched down to let Lethero of his back. When he slid off Zel turned into his human form and walked into ...
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Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Lethero Sr. Lethero climbed onto Zel's back and rested his sore head against his neck hard, scaly neck. He exhausted and it pained him to move. "Is Ajle far, Zel?" ...
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Re: The End - prologue
He looked at them, wearing their pitiful human faces. Ok, I will be openly truthful to you and say that this was a dull piece to read. I couldn't enjoy ...
Jul 16, 2008 -
Re: Elder Scrolls
When I say Elder Scrolls I do mean as in Elder Scrolls III: Morrowind and Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion. It will have all the same races, birthsigns, and skills with ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Planet Seed Chapter 1
I woke up in a purple room. My head was foggy and I felt disoriented with time and place for several seconds. Try: I woke up in a purple room, ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Her Magic Mage Part one: just the beginning.
The green, mossy plants rushed by her as out stretched branches whacked her in the face. Try: The green, mossy plants whacked her with out stretched branches as she rushed ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: The Curse(01)
As she walked around, her vision started to get dizzy. I'm not sure dizzy is the right word for this. better sit down before I fall down’ he thought. Thought ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Invisible Man, Prologue
“ Will get this guy, Billie. Don’t you worry,” Change the bold word to We'll. Nice story. It sounds creepy. I will read your others and give you a review. ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Runner
The cold feeling that I get when the rain hits my hands and face. Switch hands and face around, it sounds much better that way. Besides that one thing, I ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: shadowplay (edited)
James pleaded with his eyes, knowing that this would be the last time he ever set foot in that bar, his haven , again. I'm not sure on 'pleaded with ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
*No one try to be a hero. We really need to bring everyone together.* Lethero Jr. Lethero collapsed against a tree as he made made it to the other side ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Lethero Sr. Lethero parried a blow and took off the head of his attacker. That was when he remembered that Laney and Velna were still at his house. Damn!" he ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
*Lt's get us all together, now.* Lethero Jr. Lethero stood outside of the makeshift barraks on the night shift. All was quiet as people lied down to sleep. All the ...
Jul 10, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Lethero Sr. Lethero walked into the bar. He heard fighting going on and he thought he would check it out. He walked up to the bartender and asked, "Whose been ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada 2
Lethero Jr. Lethero walked around town seeking requests to join the militia to fight the evil. Most Magical Creatures believed him and accepted to join, but none of the humans ...
Jul 8, 2008
