Lethero

Good short story. Very descriptive and I can see myself walking with her and feeling what she feels. The grammar was perfect from what I could see and you were ...

Besides, he reasoned with himself, I would've done the same thing had it been an actual battle. Thoughts are usually expressed in italics. You don't have to do it, but ...

“Chris, hurry up with that potion , lad . We have to go soon,” called Chris's wizard master , Kirin. He stirred it with his large spoon , Is the ...

Good begininning and description, but it so far does not look like it would be a fantasy story. But then again you only posted one paragraph. Anyways it's a good ...

Far, far, away, across a vast landscape of monsters and innocents, incredible dangers and even more incredible truths, spread like a worn and wise map across a table, lies the ...

I ban you October Girl for being October and Girl.

Hi 3b. I need a review too if you have the time, please. I'm pretty sure I can trust your reviews like I can trust Jabbs. Boon the Werewolf

We’ve been in the Christine House now for six hours now .” I would get rid of one of the 'now's and replace it with something else. Intresting story. I ...

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Bonjour PA. I hate begging, but I seriously need this reviewed: It has not been touched since I posted it (I think people didn't want to read it because of ...

This was going to be my nanowrimo last year, but I never got around to doing it. I just found my outline for it recently and decided this is what ...

I am ok with blood, it does not really bother me much. I can take pretty much anything; gore, amputation, decapitation, torture, ect... Is it a problem not to be ...

"Well, I don't age as slowly as you," Lethero replied weakly. "Time wears me down faster." "You look like you've seen battle recently," Ajle commited. "Sadly, yes. It seems the ...

Lethero Sr. Zel landed lightly on the ground and crouched down to let Lethero of his back. When he slid off Zel turned into his human form and walked into ...

Lethero Sr. Zel landed lightly on the ground and crouched down to let Lethero of his back. When he slid off Zel turned into his human form and walked into ...