Lethero

The bitterly cold, winter wind blew hard through the snow covered forest. Icicles as sharp as daggers clung to the branches of every tree, threatening to fall with the slightest ...

It was evening, warm and breezy. Try: It was a warm and breezy evening. One was a girl, short and curvy, in the middle of the three, then, to the ...

Book 1: Nameless He lived and died a great hero, that Geatish king. Do you mean greatist? Ok, it was a little weird to read. I'm not saying it was ...

Ok, I will do the basic review on this: to a grammar and spelling check, and tell you what I think. This review does not count for the reviews you ...

No summer is for sitting outside in a hammock and reading a good book.

This is a set of stories that boltage, Lucy Pennykettle, and I have made up off the story of Pendragon. At the end of book 10, the last book, DJ ...

*Well, I looked through the last few pages and I have not seen Pravius once. So I thought I might as well bring her back with her own agenda. She ...

*Well, I looked through the last few pages and I have not seen Pravius once. So I thought I might as well bring her back with her own agenda. She ...

-Scado- Scado rubbed the side of his head as he got up. He glared at the zombie. If I only had the Blood Blade, he thought to himself. With a ...

Ok, I'm not really sure on how to review on pictures, but I will do the best I can do. 1. This one was nice, I didn't really see any ...

Changes=bold Italics=Suggestions (look below for more details) Where I’m going, the giant Shoe-Mounds, where humans dare not show their face, are just as their name implies : giant mounds of ...

I need a grammar review on this and to have a some comments on how I read it.

It was cold and windless in the underground city of Tlyon. Lights shown from the ground below as cars drove through the crowded streets. Scado stood on a ledge on ...

-Scado- Scado woke suddenly and jerked up realizing it was a bad move. The back of his head flared in pain. What happened? he thought to himself and then remembered ...

Ok, first thing: I'm confused on the whole point in the beginning. It doesn't make sense. My thought about it is that the character's mind is wandering around a lot. ...