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Re: The Others
I watched through the scope as the Lion exited the helicopter alone. His golden mane whipped around his face from the revolving rotary blades on the helicopter, not allowing me ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Werewolf Story
*This just came to me, so I decided to right it down. I am not sure if this will develop into a story, but I will see where it leads ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays!
Seems YWS doesn't want to put my picture up so I'll just put up the link. I made a quick image for YWS. And I am also spending Christmas with ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: The Wolf Pack Ch 1 + part 1-2 of ch 2 edited.
This is to go on with the posts I made on Wolf Pack Ch 1 Parts 1-2 and Ch 2 Parts 1-2. This is edited and changed. I accept any ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop
Here's a fantasy story. This is Ch2, but if you want to read the others they should be under the related posts with it.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: The Wolf Pack Ch 2 Part 1-2
I was on the road for about 15 hours yesterday so I got most of Ch 2 done. Here's most of what I got. ****** I returned to the house ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Unnamed-Chap. One Part One
I sit at my desk encouraging myself to complete the last three problems in my Saxon Algebra 2 book, when voices from the living room distract me. As I ponder ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Alastair
When she stopped and nervously looked around , he shifted out of her sight. She hurriedly continued home. This sentence sounds odd to me. Consider revising it. The moonlight cast ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Prologue to Alastair
As they twirled around d the room, people stared. Everyone already knew that separately Kathryn and Alastair were the most beautiful youths in the county, but no one had realized ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: The Wolf Pack: Ch 1 Part 2
Two Days Later I stood up straight, keeping my chin forward and eyes pointed at the ground. The High Alpha sat behind the desk in front of me, his cold, ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: The Wolf Pack: Ch 1 Part 1
I watched as a hunting pack left to go into the Lower Ghettos, and dreamt of the day when I would turn eighteen, becoming a full member of the Pack. ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Orion:The Conqueror (Part 2 Comments encouraged)
Orion thought fast. He didn’t have a weapon, he didn’t have repellent. What should he do? Then Livie said, “O-Ron, he have frens.” Orion didn’t need to know what fren ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Hysteria Horrifico
This of which I speak was by some to be terrible, to some it was immoral, and to some, it was unheard of, but to me, it was a place ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Argavon-Chap. One
Dead branches whipped my face as I jumped over logs and dodged their arrows. Show me, don't tell me. This is a 1st person, you have more advantage showing what ...
Nov 15, 2009 -
Re: Mutant Armageddon (Charles Xavier's Worse Fear)
"That's an amazing power you have there," said Nick Fury. "But I've never seen you before. Who are you?" Ash sighed. "My name is Ash." He didn't like sharing his ...
Oct 2, 2009
