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exuding some harsh , innate gleam. First off, comma after harsh. Secondly, the wording on this is weird to me.Try changing the wording. Immediately , she had gushed to the ...

I mean , not just me , but everyone who knew me knew that. " . . . not just me . . . " is kind of like an ...

Firstly, I know it says short stories, but this is very short for a short story. The sharp prickers poked and pinched at my ankles, and I winced . What ...

Review is done, Classy.

I mean, they all looked so silly[b], them[b] with their medieval weaponry. The bold part bothered me. I think it sounds better with the comma and them omitted. Overall: Good ...

Your review is done black sheep.

Back at my old home in New York, my mom had gotten a promotion to her already high-paying position at the company job . sat in front of the T.V ...

I guess I will claim Arian. Name: Arian Age: 17 Gender: Male Appearance: Dark hair that only reaches to shoulders, tan skin, brown eyes, and he usually has a frown ...

Paul Holiday lives in a small sea-side town called Nichols Bay ; there isn’t much there , a post-office, a general store, a cafe, a hotel, a bait and tackle ...

I will accept any review requests except poetry. I promise to be truthful in all my reviews and not hold anything back to spare your feelings. Once you get ask ...

Figured you'd guys get a kick out of this, so here is my school's planner for this year: Yes, the school mascot is a penguin.

Day 1, 9:36pm About three hours later, after my team had set up multiple cameras in the living room, we settled down in there for an *EVP session. I had ...

“You promised!” a tall man bellowed. Lower case a. “I know , ” t he other man said in his hissing voice. Comma after know and a lower case t ...

Self consciously , I smoothed down the edges of my newly ironed blouse, and wiped my sweaty hands on my black dress pants. Add a comma there. And is the ...

Before you ask, no there is no Case Files #1-4. The X’s Residence Case #5 Date: 5-10-04 Day 1, 12:06pm The Miller’s house was a large, white Victorian-style house with ...