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Re: The Game (September 8th|Only 1 spot open)
The Game The Game: An online competition made up of twenty teams with five people each. For a single month you and your team plug yourself into the Reality Chambers ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: MechaNet (Part 1)
This is part one, so it doesn't kick off that much until the next part (if I decide to continue). If you think it is awful, I will instantly forget ...
Sep 7, 2010 -
Re: A New Nhyte
Firstly, separate the paragraphs if there is more than that big one in the middle. Deaf but for the heart wrenching screams that seemed to be coming from no where ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Untitled Chapter One
I peered through the telescope, tapping the zoom button and the planets suddenly were right in front of me. She must be rich, because that's an expensive telescope, considering telescopes ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: (I Told You So) Prologue
Put spaces in between paragraphs. It makes it much easier to read. The adult male looked down at his lover. This is kind of over doing it. the tall male ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Hellbound Part I
Put more spaces. This: Pain exploded in the back Strykker’s head as he flew backwards into the wall, small glass jars and chalk coming down from the shelves onto him. ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
"Are they awake?" I heard someone ask from very far away. "No, they're both still out," said a second voice." "Well, get them in the house, we don't need to ...
Sep 6, 2010 -
Re: Alzina Adalwolf
My parents named me Alice. And that name was fine. For a 6 year old girl. But I was no longer 6 . And I was no longer Alice. This ...
Sep 5, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
Zuki Zuman - Hacker - 6:30pm I made it to the armory about fifteen minutes after I left HQ. Neptune was sitting there, casting his glance every which way, a ...
Sep 4, 2010 -
Re: Dancing With Danger~EDITED
PLEASE COMMENT! Please don't put those up there. If people want to comment, they will. Fear clenched at me, seizing up through my veins. Fear clenched you? Change it, it ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
Spork, Zeki doesn't physically enter the computer (yet). It's only his conscious in the computer. The hallway is only a physical representation of how his mind interpreting the inside of ...
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
My job was simple: I sat back in HQ with the phone rewired to our computer system and used it to hack into the guards' database the old fashion way. ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
My job was much simpler than the other jobs, but still very important, and I was the only one who could pull it off. My job was to use the ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
Zeki Zumun - The Hacker - 11:30pm I plucked the cellphone out of Tobi's hands before he could do anything with it. "What the hell you doing?" he asked as ...
Sep 1, 2010 -
Re: The Chosen [Started!]
Zeki Zuman - The Hacker - 11:05 "So, were you able to see anything," Tobi asked me as we made our way through the streets. "Nothing as usual," I replied. ...
Aug 31, 2010
