Lethero

So no one gets confused this is a kind of flash back to the Markus Flint in the future. Also Im going to give him demonic powers [not given anything ...

Prologue My name is Markus, Markus Flint. I could tell you what I am and what I was, but you wouldn’t believe me. In my old home town they would ...

Good poem, never really liked poems but this one was good.

:D Awsome story I can't what to see it when it's finished. If you get it published I'll get it and read it all and show it off.

I started writing Dragon Fire at the end of seventh grade. So I was 13 then

I just don't get. It looks like a weird story by some person who has way to much time on their hands.

I would say it's Science-Fiction like the first person. It's good and I look foward to the next part.

Chapter 2 When Nasaru woke up by the light shining in his room he left it and went to the eating area. “Sleep good last night?” asked Gano. “Yes. Replied ...

If you see anything that needs changed please don't keep it a secret I'm new at this and need another readers tip i could use to make my story more ...

If I were I'd keep a speelchecker handy and make sure you capitalize names and don't capitaze words that are not names, places, or beginning of a sentence. I liked ...

It's good but why have some one die so quickly into it. But otherwise if I was a teacher I would give it a very high A.

I learned this from my english teacher and she said that everytime there is a different speaker in a story you have to make a new paragraph. Don't know why, ...

Chapter One Beginnings In the early morning hours, with the smell of saltwater in the air Nasaru was shaken awake by his father Gano. “Wah!” said Nasaru. “Wake up son ...