LetMeLive

I like it. I like the way it starts. Keep writing, keep flowing. You've got something special.

Eighteen Years Ago In the small town of Camilla, a stranger named Christian scurries down the street which smelled of fresh rain. He looks for the right house, while trying ...

It seemes like you tried just a little to hard with the ryhming. I also agree with what emotion_less said, it sounds like a poem that you would see on ...

I really liked it. For a second it had me wondering what you were getting at until I got to the end. Nice Senario, i have a poem that I ...

I don't understand, & I've got a headache, Squeeze the pain from my heart and leave me here cold, Suddenly this problem is becoming to bold, What I want is ...

I like. I like. Nice ryhme scheme. It had a nice affect on drawing the reader in.

I think its really good. Keep writing. I like your style.

I personally think this was a good poem. It was run-on. Which is what made it good. From the way i read it, it seemed like you knew what you ...