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Re: Open Up for Me
This is amazing. I love the last two stanzas, especially. Great work! Not a single spelling or grammar error. Keep writing poems like this, and you'll do very well.
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Forever and a Day and a Half
This is pretty. The flow is good, and it's a nice thought.
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Endless
Never Ending, Ever bending, The sky encircles our world. Never failing, Ever sailing, Her wonders are unfurled: The bearer of lights On darkest nights, The sky never sleeps. The throne ...
Nov 2, 2011