LeonieLacey

Haha, yeah i was laughing actually-err no.....does B1 read poetry? i think he'd be stunned if he knew that you wrote this. B1 doesn't know what he's missing. Spectacular!

This poem is brilliant! i disagree with the comment above about 'doubly' being not a good word to use in poetry, i think the last line is a great conclusion ...

You didn't lose the one about the clock-i really like that one, its so nice, its like 'tick tock, the clock strikes one, tick tock something, something i forget what ...

Thanks for the really nice comments everyone, it's very encouraging!

Are we infatuated? Or are we crazy in love? Do you like me for my persona? Or my dazzling looks? Do you think we are a 'match made in heaven?' ...

'Asstounds' no, i think thats how it's normally spelled! Elvis? How random! I think it was more like a couple who had been married for many years, and now their ...

You know, that one about the clock, in the back of your copy today. It was something like Tick tocthe clock strikes three' or something. i can't reall remember but ...

I am in gardening while writing this. i just got that message now. you didn't lose that poem!

To take my mind off things at home I've decided to go for a casual stroll Far away from the things that remind me The people, the silence, the smell ...

So it was B1 who inspired you on this poem Chynel? Interesting. I didn't know you wrote about B1. Hand on heart, i didn't laugh, seriously. Like i said before, ...

This poem is really beautiful, very impressive. I love the first four lines, they were elegant and a great choice of words. keep on writing!

It was a very long poem, but i like your style, it is simple and easy to read and understand. I also like the issue you are writing about in ...

Very powerful poem-love it! The rhyming is exceptional

This poem is really cool-i really love the message and the concept. I particularly like the second stanza-very good choice of words and it has a nice rhythm. keep writing!

Really nice poem...very unique and original.