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LeonieLacey

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reminiscence

    Hi! Thanks everyone for the reviews! Storyweaver,i see what you mean about that wording and the word 'red'...kinda off; thanks for pointing it out, i'll think about this one and ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Reminiscence

    Those lines on your face, laced and weaved into drooping skin, tell a thousand stories. In your house, in this old room I wonder why I left this place, or ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    Hi lilymoore,thank you for reviewing this. In response to your first point, i agree with you about it because i didnt realise that before. However, i think that if i ...

    May 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    Thanks everybody! Hi Solvalery, yes, you're right, I love my Cello. I've only been playing it for a few months, but its great, i love all string instruments really. I ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Double Bass

    How was I to know, That a gentle, swift stroke Of your bow would make me Fall deeply in love? At a time when my future was all planned out, ...

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Untitled

    Wow really good for a first poem...especially like the ending. Well done!!

    May 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Widow's Voice

    Thank you Green Eyes, thats very nice of you, I appreciate it :)

    Feb 12, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Widow's Voice

    Washing dishes one lonely day, You heard a whisper; Somebody called your name. From your heart, you felt it And you turned quickly, Dropping a plate. Smash! It hit the ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary

    Thank you, Tariq Muhammad, for the review, I appreciate it very much. I understand what you mean by the 'possibly mistaken non-mistakes' and I will make some changes. Again, thanks, ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary

    Yeah, it must have taken you ages to write out all those GEORGES'. Not that you didn't enjoy it for KEVIN, I give no comment. I think you know what ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary

    What I dread the most, Is forgetting about you When I've left this school. I won't be going far, But to me, we'll be worlds away. I'll lie on my ...

    Nov 2, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Pain.

    Haha, i told you this was enough to make a poem! God, well i guess i should review this poem seeing as i'm the first one reading it. But i ...

    Oct 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: School Romance?

    Thanks pazey13, i'm glad that people can relate to this poem, i got the idea from a book talking about the difference between love and infatuation, and the rest just ...

    Oct 26, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: School Romance?

    You can deny it all you like Leonie, but the truth is *Sings* YOU WANT TO LOVE HIM! YOU WANT TO KISS HIM! YOU WANT TO HUG HIM! *Sings* Muhahaha!! ...

    Oct 25, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: School Romance?

    WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love this one! Was it Goulash that inspired you ;] ? Hah! But seriously I do love this poem!! Upload the one about No mans land! Chynel. Not ...

    Oct 24, 2010


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