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Re: Reminiscence
Hi! Thanks everyone for the reviews! Storyweaver,i see what you mean about that wording and the word 'red'...kinda off; thanks for pointing it out, i'll think about this one and ...
Nov 16, 2011 -
Re: Reminiscence
Those lines on your face, laced and weaved into drooping skin, tell a thousand stories. In your house, in this old room I wonder why I left this place, or ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Double Bass
Hi lilymoore,thank you for reviewing this. In response to your first point, i agree with you about it because i didnt realise that before. However, i think that if i ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Double Bass
Thanks everybody! Hi Solvalery, yes, you're right, I love my Cello. I've only been playing it for a few months, but its great, i love all string instruments really. I ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Double Bass
How was I to know, That a gentle, swift stroke Of your bow would make me Fall deeply in love? At a time when my future was all planned out, ...
May 11, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
Wow really good for a first poem...especially like the ending. Well done!!
May 11, 2011 -
Re: The Widow's Voice
Thank you Green Eyes, thats very nice of you, I appreciate it :)
Feb 12, 2011 -
Re: The Widow's Voice
Washing dishes one lonely day, You heard a whisper; Somebody called your name. From your heart, you felt it And you turned quickly, Dropping a plate. Smash! It hit the ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary
Thank you, Tariq Muhammad, for the review, I appreciate it very much. I understand what you mean by the 'possibly mistaken non-mistakes' and I will make some changes. Again, thanks, ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary
Yeah, it must have taken you ages to write out all those GEORGES'. Not that you didn't enjoy it for KEVIN, I give no comment. I think you know what ...
Nov 4, 2010 -
Re: In My Nearly Empty Diary
What I dread the most, Is forgetting about you When I've left this school. I won't be going far, But to me, we'll be worlds away. I'll lie on my ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Pain.
Haha, i told you this was enough to make a poem! God, well i guess i should review this poem seeing as i'm the first one reading it. But i ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: School Romance?
Thanks pazey13, i'm glad that people can relate to this poem, i got the idea from a book talking about the difference between love and infatuation, and the rest just ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: School Romance?
You can deny it all you like Leonie, but the truth is *Sings* YOU WANT TO LOVE HIM! YOU WANT TO KISS HIM! YOU WANT TO HUG HIM! *Sings* Muhahaha!! ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: School Romance?
WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!! I love this one! Was it Goulash that inspired you ;] ? Hah! But seriously I do love this poem!! Upload the one about No mans land! Chynel. Not ...
Oct 24, 2010
