Leonheart

hi Amanda, thanks for critiquing my work! good to see you're getting into things already. hope to see you around a little bit more.

i write a lot of fanfics, mainly for Final Fantasy or Harry Potter. but i'll also do random fantasy stories, or a lot of prose as well. i might try ...

after watching a presentation about Road Traffic Collisions today, i thought i'd try to express one of the anecdote's we were told --------- He’s out now, but still He’s trapped ...

ok, seeing as i was in the presentation as well, i know the distress this particular story caused. I'm not entirely sure the repetition works for me, it seems to ...

I would love to be able to write a good novel. of course, i try to do things, but nothing ever succeeds. i often feel that a reason for this, ...

on the whole, i liked the poem, and liked the idea. its good to see some political stuff, and its good to see it being written fairly well it was ...

hey, new member to new member! i thought i may as well get to know people, this site is great for writers, new or old to it, so you'll fit ...

I stood there, waiting, waiting. Staring hard at the wood before me. The wood that separated me from my prey. My warm breath hit the cold night air and rose ...

Harry Potter Fanfic The sky over the small town was slowly filtering between colours, from a deep shade of blue night, to the roaring inferno of orange sunrise. As the ...

ok, i liked two main things. the concept behind this is good, it could have been excellent. and also, i like how the first verse uses "cute" words, like cooties ...

i enjoyed reading this. reading the original in cadmium's post, i could see the little differences he made, and they made a great deal of difference. losing some of the ...

just doesn't have the effect of a poem to me. its a simple "repetition of questions" that don't seem to lead to anywhere. like Phorcys says, "What Were They Like" ...

It didn't really capture my attention like i feel poems should do, especially when working on a poem that discusses Loss. i found that it didn't seem to flow perfectly. ...

i don't want my username changed, i always use this name, but what i mean is i'm happy for people to call me Tim rather than referring to me as ...

hi there, i'm not good at introductions, so here goes. my real name is Tim, you can all call me that, i don't mind. i'd rather be called Tim than ...