Leonheart

got to disagree Crysi, people don't feel so good if you start calling them names. its still talking about them, but not exactly in the way they want you to. ...

i disagree with some of yuor statements. the thing when you comment on what is said during the letters. i don't see what needs correcting. see, in a letter, its ...

thanks a lot Xanthan. personally, i prefer the two lines for the last line of verse 1. it flows more to me. what do you suggest i add in the ...

what would you suggest specifically?

hi B-man.... see you at school.

WELCOME! TO YWS! sorry, hyper... hee hee

thanks for the in depth critique, although i have to say that its a little hard to read. i know things are a little unclear, that was what i was ...

A while ago, i did a short story randomly, with an image as inspiration. i think the image was a spider on a mans hand, which i had to include ...

like Clau and Fand said, its too short, and not really a poem. its a few words, yep, written like a poem, yep, but that doesn't make it a poem. ...

i wouldn't ever go as far as acting with friends, even though me and a couple of my friends do drama at school, and always act as our own group. ...

we always had to write stories in primary school, every week. i used to hate it, and used to be really bad at it too. i was probably 7 or ...

ill go through each paragraph, highlight the bits i think needs work and have a look after the paragraph is finished Cold, warm. Loud, quiet. Dull, bright. Two naturally selected ...

ok, Tabris, thanks for that, i sort of see where you're coming from. this piece was born as a homework for Drama, we had to do a piece to be ...

to me, things flow more naturally in the past tense when writing a story. going into present tense confuses me, because i keep reverting back to the more natural past ...

id say search for the answer to the question "why be an author who doesn't like writing?" you wont get a good story without that passion for it. i normally ...