Lena

This is a self portrait that I drew this summer. The photograph that I based it off of was taken when I was 10-11. The dark shading down the center ...

As I walked to the lunch hall one Tuesday, I was aware that heads were turning in the corridor. I noticed that people who were huddled in their tight little ...

I like what you said about the descriptions. Sometimes when there is a lot of descriptions I just skip to the dialogue.

Ok, I'm going to edit this whole thing. This is gonna take all day---because it's long, not because it has a lot of errors. If I edit a lot, that ...

Do you mean writing a diary for your character while you write your normal story? Or having your diary be the story? I think the first one is a good ...

I was so excited when I saw you'd posted the next chapter! I really like your work. The alley was next to Courtney’s house and an apartment complex. It passed ...

Before we start this, I'm an amateur sketch artist, specializing in portraits, so don't say that I shouldn't be talking because I 'can't draw'. I had to look at a ...

I'm going to start out by saying that you are an excellent writer, far better than me. I really don't care if you ignore all of this, it's your story ...

It actually sounds pretty cool, but I'm basically OVER the whole vampire thing. Twilight finished/started the whole vampire fad. You won't be able to write a vampire book and get ...

I'm too lazy to switch my font. In elementary school, we would collect everyone's writing at the end of the year and bind it together and give everyone a copy. ...

I don't have much a choice, it rains almost every day where I live, even in the summer. I don't pay much attention to it, but I am more likely ...

I started writing 'short' stories when I was 7-8 (I have a late birthday, so 1st and 2nd grade). They were about 15-20 pages long, and were usually either about ...

Besides Eragon (worst fantasy ever... even the names of the characters are taken from LoTR.. eragon-aragorn, arya-arwen) there is a series called 'the lost years of merlin' by ta barron ...

If your writing realistic fiction and you know what year your character was born, look up the top 1000 names for that year. One of the biggest problems I see ...

I was going to write a detailed response for this piece until I read it. In my opinion, you should proofread your writing at least a little bit before publishing ...