Lena

[s]Curiously timid,[/s] Lily Andrews timidly rushed through the [s]locker adorned[/s] halls of Peters[s]V[/s] v ille High, keeping a wary eye out for any teachers or h [s]H[/s]all m Monitors who ...

[s]Curiously timid,[/s] Lily Andrews timidly[b] rushed through the [s]locker adorned[/s] halls of Peters[s]V[/s][b]v ille High, keeping a wary eye out for any teachers or h [s]H[/s]all m Monitors who

[s]The sound of a constant annoying beeping sound awoke her[/s] She was awoken by a constant beep. [s]Beep...beep... beep...[/s] She groaned and opened her eyes. At first, everything was blurry, ...

Gruß Dich! Chapter II: Guilty The first rays of light were [s]only but[/s] beginning to break through the dark [s]of night[/s], and the cold morning air covered the city in ...

I'm entering my freshman year at high school, and for some reason I wasn't given ANY electives. (lame, I'm the only person that happened to) Instead of Art and Creative ...

Sorry, I didn't read the whole thing. It's too long and I'm tired. I worked all day. Anyway, in case you really forgot the name of the 'Lady's Choice' dance, ...

I'm sorry to start this off on such a negative point, but I absolutely despise vampires. Ever since Twilight became such a big hit, all the young writers are writing ...

It was an odd scene displayed on the far side of the riverbank. The guard on duty was puzzled by it. Only minutes ago, stumbling through the rotting shrubbery, the ...

Marissa stared at Colt as he finished telling her what [s]had[/s] happened. She shook her head in disbelief. "So your saying that someone murdered the CEO of Masson and Co. ...

It was Morning in the city of Derc, and the dim light that had begun to climb over the looming mountains[s];[/s] bathed the city in a mellow gold. Only the ...

I like the second one the best. I wish I could draw manga. but for reason I suck at it... good job

EDIT: this top part was written the next day, and with a more civil mind. Ok, this was taken by a 'stupid idiot' standpoint, in reality I sort of understand ...

Thanks yeah w/ the ear and ponytail those are two of my least favorite things too draw, so I spend very little time on them. The hair isn't supposed to ...

Er... Kenni, all the places where Dommie said to put commas were correct. I didn't see anywhere where there needed to be an apostrophe. Maybe I didn't look hard enough, ...

“Riley stop worrying,” exclaimed Sam. My version: "Riley, stop worrying," said Sam. 'exclaimed' doesn't really fit because he's not really explaining anything! “How can I not worry?” I asked.