Lena.Wooldridge

I don't really know what to say, except I don't see why you are trying to explain your story to Sargsauce, telling him he "didn't read it" when really there ...

1. How old are the main characters? Like Lethero said, if the boy was a teenager he would be fighting for the military at this time. 2. There were no ...

Hey, I really liked the parts when you were describing the way the woman looked and wondering about what she'd gone through. I can totally relate - I make up ...

This is set in 1954, in the Soviet Union, in a GULAG forced labor camp in Eastern Siberia. The main character is named Pavel Miladanovich. He is 15-17 years old, ...

This is a true story, and it was not written very well, but when I type out things it helps me get over them. Thank you for reading. And this ...

Through the absolute darkness of the bedroom there can be seen glowing white figures: a man and his woman. The woman is curled into a ball, her nakedness half covered ...

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This is easily one of the best short stories I have red on this site. Stark red numbers glared at him I don't know if I would use the word ...

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“Must be a storm coming , ” I said. "Must be a storm coming," I said. One of the commanding officers just laughed. “That’s just the sound of the shells ...

“What…what happened exactly?” “Well, you’d have to go back to the year 1935, October 11th 1933 to be exact. The day my father became a Nazi solider.” So... Cliche... It ...

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What an interesting plot.

It's impossible to get pregnant from dry sex. Sorry to ruin your whole story, but the guy would have had to blow a giant load right over her vagina, and ...

Just wanted to tell you that all of your semi-colons are used incorrectly. Remove them and, in most cases, replace them with simple commas. Remember that the area on both ...