Lena.Wooldridge

My girlfriend dumped me today. Right next to my locker during the passing period between third and fourth hour. Not very considerate. I didn’t even have to tell anyone about ...

Hey! This is very nice, I just have to make a couple remarks. His pleads for me Should be "pleas" bed was so warm and comfortable that i didn't move ...

Due to the detail of this piece and the emotion enclosed within it, I'm assuming that it is at least a partially true story. If so, I'm very sorry that ...

This whole story didn't seem all that realistic. This seems more like a mafia world, not a drug world. Low-level coke and weed dealers know better than to shoot a ...

This whole story didn't seem all that realistic. This seems more like a mafia world, not a drug world. Low-level coke and weed dealers know better than to shoot a ...

This is a prologue to the project I have been working on for the last year. It is the story of a young boy who lives in the Kolyma gold ...

I've kind of been looking around, but I haven't found very many other good writing critique websites. Can anybody link one? Thanks. Lena

This was a very cute and cheerful story. I especially liked the ending, when everyone in the school ends up nice :) There were a few tense errors throughout the ...

Note: This is way too long, but I haven't posted in months, so whatever. The first real important thing I did when I got home after all those months was ...

Actually, you should listen to me. If you split this in thirds, like I said ( thereby SHORTENING IT) you will get more reviews. I know that you can't put ...

Just stopping by quickly. I had every intention of reading this... Until I saw how long it was. If you want people to actually read your entire story, you need ...

First off, I can totally relate to everything that this is written about. The main problem I have with this is all of the grammatical errors. There is an extreme ...

The only issue I found was that you continuously said his name. When you are actually talking or writing to someone, you would never repeat their name so many times. ...

It is impossible to fully explain a man/woman's life in only a few short paragraphs. This could be made interesting if you were to spend more time going into a ...

Kira winced as the sound Not a good idea to begin with talking about "the sound" when we have no idea what "the sound" is. "The sound" acts almost as ...