Lena.Wooldridge

Okay, well everyone is going to view this as a joke. It seems that you are not taking it seriously, at all. Just to be honest.

haha, that's crazy. But what were you looking for when you posted this?

Dear Jake, I opened this post, truly believing that I would read it. However, I soon realized that it contained no less than thirteen ginormous paragraphs. I almost had a ...

Did you fail this assignment?

breathing in the sweet smell of break. If you insinuating that it's a day before winter break, you might want to clarify, because I was confused. little freshmen dressed in ...

This is just the prologue to an idea I have, tell me if it's any good. Oh, and the title isn't final. At all. I know that it's horrible x) ...

Thankssss :)

Humans are curious beings:inquisitive, sensitive, rash. The foolish, stupid creatures think they are superior over all else, engrossed with themselves. Perhaps what disgusts me most is their belief th

I made some suggested edits, but would still appreciate more critique (: Thanks Everyone! -Lena.

Sara was back on the field, Normally I'd say "back in field". Only instead of Ashley, Mike, Alyssa, Jess, and Tom This introduces a lot of characters, all with common ...

knock on our front door awakes Try "the" instead of "our". clock.It's There should be a space between "clock." and "it's". In the other room Unless the house only has ...

Obviously, I have not read the other chapters, so I will be missing parts of the plot. I'll try to refrain from griping to much about apparent holes in the ...

The rule is sacrosanct I, for one, have no idea what sacrosanct means. I don't know anyone else who does, either. It'd be better if you tried "adamant" which, I'm ...

I had begged, pleaded Try just saying "I begged, pleaded....", it sounds much better without the "had" ;) ten minutes until the flight would board Instead of saying "until", use ...

on the night of the murder of Julius Caesar. Put a paragraph break after this, and do a : instead of a period. Also, I just read Julius Caesar, and ...