Lena.Wooldridge

I know you said nothing over 13, but there are just a couple s-words in this. Thanks, Lena

Hey! First off, this was a very well-written piece. I have a few nitpicks however. 1) Plural words do not need an apostrophe (') Some day’s when I was alone ...

Alright, so for the most part, this is written pretty good. I enjoyed reading this a lot. But I do have some Nitpicks... 1) When you use a big word, ...

1) In the next couple of scenes, you realize that she's different from David in that he's more driven than she is. He is also very feminine, whereas she is ...

Thanks :)

Thanks Classy :)

thanks :)

I'm not quite sure where I'm going with this. Just tell me if it seems too boring. I know I use "said" a lot, it would be nice if you ...

This was written pretty well. There's just a couple things I have to say: 1) The overuse of the word "had" is annoying. You should use that word as little ...

Pshhh this wasn't a train wreck at all. It's actually really good. Like, really really good. The only problem is that nearly all the sentences are run-ons. But this is ...

Keawrite- Before I even attempt to review this, I'd have to ask that you break up the paragraphs just a little bit. The huge paragraphs are really quite intimidating for ...

Overall, I can really really really relate to, like, half the stuff that is in this. From the missing third grade to lying to your mom about breakfast. That aspect ...

Grammatical Errors This day, I was Sofira. This is not only an example of (I think it's figurative?) language. Also you don't need to include the comma. I'd switch it ...

many other figments of my imaginations Should be "figments of my imagination s " there were many other figments of my imaginations bustling to and fro, but they don't count ...

He was the type of lawyer who got stuck with all the cases that wouldn’t be won. I guess his gain is my loss. This doesn't make much sense, it's ...