LemonyIce

Helllooo! Im HarryPotterRocks and Ill be reviewing your poem. Firstly, in the first line you need to write July with capital J (kind of like I did just now) Then ...

Awesome! Though I have a few things to tell you. Where you have written: As I walk, The lonely road, A boy joins me, He too, Has insomnia. Here, I ...

This is such a sweet poem!!! I love it! Its awesome! However, just one thing I would like to tell you. The part where you say: Easily, He makes it ...

Hey there! I read this and guess what? Just a few hours back I wrote a poem just like this. Though of course I wrote that before reading this. It's ...

Hi there! I am reviewing your story today! I think this story was a little too overboard. I mean, how can her leg come off completely just because of the ...

This poem is amazing! In one paragraph how you just took a simple everyday object and made a poem out of it is just so cool! And that's a pretty ...

This was such a beautiful poem. I think it's simply amazing how much you expressed with words. It's wonderful really beautiful. I love it!

Hi there! I really like this poem. It's quite good and I think you did a really good job expressing yourself. It's quite obvious that you love to sing just ...

I close my eyes, Remember those times. When I used to jump about. I used to have my fun. I wish I could be there now, Why did I change? ...

Awesome! When I read "Black hair" I thought you meant me but then i realized of course it wasn't :D It's coooll and fuunnyyy!

This is so sweet!!!! I love it! It's a really good poem!!!! You should write more like this!

Okay, this was really good, but I have a couple of things to tell you. Firstly where you say "In its sweetness lies those fruits." Here, I think instead of ...

It was a dark, stormy night. Elipsa, a tall brunette, was trapped in a cave on a beach. She had been taking a quiet, moonlit stroll on the sands when ...