LemonyIce

I. Love. This. Poem. The imagery is wonderful and the concept is amazing! But, just one thing. Even I used to do this before until someone told me: You don't ...

Warning: Cheesy! (I think.) I just wrote this poem because all these feelings are bottled up inside and I need to let them out. *Sigh* Love is so painful but ...

Hellooooo!! I'm HPR and my first critique is this: In the middle of the poem this usually isn't necessary but at least begin your poem with a CAPITAL LETTER. And ...

You have just made me cry using a poem! *Sniff* This was so sad! :( Only, I agree with the person before me. You need to have a rhyme scheme ...

This is the shortest poem I have ever come across. I can't believe it's even possible to write such a short poem. I can't even pick out a favorite stanza ...

This is a poem dedicated to my best friend. She's awesome! Listen to me carefully, I won't say it again. I'll make sure you listen, because this is meant for ...

Why is the poem called Unknown Intentions? I don't know why, but it just doesn't seem to fit with the poem. And, as we all do, I have a few ...

Ummm... I don't want to be mean but seriously snails ? That's what you're scared of? Or is it just supposed to be funny so that's why you wrote it? ...

This is truly beautiful. The most wonderful poem I ever read. I feel a little ashamed reviewing something about God, but I still have a few nitpicks. The small hands ...

Hello! I'm HPR and I shall review your poem. Firslty, (I'm really sorry about this.) I didn't realise it was about a vampire until I read the review of the ...

Travel with me, And we shall go, To the magical world, The world of books. Let's move to Ashton Place, Along with Miss Penelope. We'll be Nannies just like her, ...

Awww!! This is sweet!! I love it. Only one thing to tell you:- Run away with me to Neverland , Where everything shines, the sky, the sand . Where pixies, ...

Awww!! This is sweet!! I love it. Only one thing to tell you:- Run away with me to Neverland , Where everything shines, the sky, the sand . Where pixies, ...

Run!  Run quick! Before they catch you. Before they take you back. You must run away. Run away from them. They are dangerous. They will hurt you. So run! Run ...

I want peace, I want quiet, I want tranquility. People around me, They keep talking. They keep babbling, And I don't listen. Why can't they be silent? They just ramble ...