Lemons

Thanks very much for reading. First, the repetition of some words in close succession is intentional, and is supposed to add a certain melodic quality to the narration. I did ...

Hi again, The narrator of the young man story is supposed to be quite odd and untrustworthy; he recounts the story of Levin as if he really was in the ...

PS: It seems you understand the characters well, and I am very pleased! The young man is supposed to be an unlikeable person; he is bratty, spoiled (ironically), and larger-than-life ...

Hi, Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I appreciate the effort put in. First, I think I agree with your critique of the direct commentary. I shall have ...

Thanks very much for reading. Several other full chapters have already been posted. Lemons

Hi, Thanks very much! I have almost the entire novel finished so I will make sure to post more of it. Have you read the first 4 chapters also? Thanks ...

Always a pleasure to review these works. No problem

I will, for now, skip your comments on the words and grammar. Thanks for the comment on the last paragraph, I enjoyed writing it and still enjoy reading it myself. ...

(I do look forward to finishing)

Yes books with different storylines are great and all, but be cautious of those books that do a poor job with it. I imagine it difficult to write like that ...

Hi, Thanks very much for you review. I appreciate very much the things you've brought up, especially your thoughts on the young man. I would point out that the prose ...

(ps. the title is "Hell is Other People" (Le Enfer c'est les Autres). It is taken from French philosopher Jean-Paul Sartre's play "No Exit")

Hi, (spoiler alert) First, thanks very much for reviewing this summary. I appreciate your review quite a bit, and if you are willing, I look forward to collaborating. Yes, I ...

you're very welcome and keep writing

Zsmith, First of all, thanks very much for the time and effort in reading the excerpt. I appreciate that tremendously. I want to note that I don't find anything particularly ...