LemonadeKiss

Returning again to heap my praises upon your writing style! Edna is my jam. I was pleasantly surprised that you didn't try to use the normal mystical places everyone always ...

It's always hard to review lyrics, because you can't really know what it'll sound like without music. I think you did a great job though. A lot of lyric postings ...

Again with the showing of characters' dispositions! You're really gifted. I thought you handled Methodius' clear disapproval really well, using his actions instead of just saying that he didn't like ...

There's a few more issues with this chapter than the prologue. Helpfully, they're practically all in the first few paragraphs, and consist almost entirely of unnecessary words and repeated phrases. ...

Despite what other reviewers have said, I haven't had a single issue separating the characters—in fact, they all have wonderfully unique appearances in my head. I was immediately caught by ...