Lemikita

The stage The scene being what it is, there is no curtain. The audience is there, immediate, raw, so close, yet so far. I venture out - against my fear, ...

CLC! I thought this was a good ending to the chapter. There didn't happen to much, but I thought you handled the not-so-much-happening very well. Alas, I found something that ...

Cookie-lemon-cookie!!! Hahahaha... I'll explain later, if you care about the story behind that. I really liked this chapter. I was actually surprised to see Adele perform monologues out of the ...

Hey, how can you tell that the old guy doesn't have any hair if he's wearing a baseball cap?

Loved it!!! I read the first part and thought that you were either going for a happy ending which would have been pretty sappy (at least if I'd written it... ...

No fair!! You can't leave us like this!! Come on, I want to go exploring with them! :( *pouts* Anyways, here's something I think you should fix: He half-expected her ...

I've edited it now. Though I didn't put in all the commas. :P

Summer was packing her bags. With a contemplative gesture, she tucked a strand of her hair behind her right ear. She still wasn't used to the new short haircut, but ...

Great! I really liked this chapter. I don't know, I would have thought this would be a difficult chapter to write for you. But you managed really well and even ...

Then he started feeling stupid. What kind of idiot was he, standing here ogling at the stars like they were a hundred million pairs of perfectly-formed breasts? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!

I can only agree with the above review. I really liked it, even more as the first chapter this sucked me in and I couldn't stop reading. It flows naturally, ...

I've edited it... The mirror. A friend? Or not? I look at myself, who else? Myself, pale, tired. My face a sickly color, circles under my eyes. I don't remember ...

Collages aren't really my thing, so I won't comment on that one, since I can't really tell you what you did right or wrong with that one. The second one ...

Yay! Chapter! Chance to procrastinate! No matter what you think, I think it was good. One thing, I think you did this before, is that when you flashback, you use ...

*le gasp*!!! I just realized I read this but never got around to reviewing it! Oh my, what a bad friend I am... I really liked it. It's funny, flows ...