Leilani

hellloooooo saw your request on my wall so i decided to come by and check out your story ^-^ first off i would like to add that don't bunch your ...

Since everyone above me took the words out of my mouth I agree with all of it. There were some errors which again they pointed above. I like it, I'm ...

I like how mysterious the woman is but you've only describe her looks maybe describe how her eyes look through the mask? there are a couple of punctual mistakes so ...

I like what I'm reading but there are a few stuff I want to kindly point out ^-^ your paragraphs should be spaced out it just looks like one huge ...