Leilani

i agree with u. i really didnt like this chapter at all and i was planning to revise the whole thing ^-^

chp 1 ^-^ chp 2 ^-^ Thank you so much! ur cool xD 8)

It's been... I think thirteen years since then. I feel old. who are u telling =__=

:D i've never been in iss before >>

I think my first story that I wrote was a comic book >< I don't remember much of it but all I know is that I was very poor at ...

haha. i like leilani better >> easier to pronounce than my real name >

Thank you so much ^-^

hello Mysty *Joana* to YWS I hope you will enjoy it here because I sure did lol I like rice XD

well first u need to set the scene Are they in the middle of an event of some kind? Are the characters alone? What events led up to them being ...

I like what I'm reading but there are a few stuff I want to kindly point out ^-^ your paragraphs should be spaced out it just looks like one huge ...

thanks jetpack :D i really appreciate it ^-^

I write in my room where it's quiet and no music or talking distracts me from my thinking and creative space hehe

“What the h-” “Oh my god! I am so sorry. I didn’t watch where I was going. I was thinking about something that was totally irrelevant.” “You got that right,” ...

didn't u review mine already O.o i dont remember =___=

scene: a place :) :p