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Thanks so much! I wish I had this critique before I had turned it in. My biggest mistake was letting my friends tell me what they thought of it and ...

I really enjoyed reading this! The emotions were so real and I could really visualize your writing! First chapters are the hardest. Keep writing! :D

Llum’s the Word Chapter One: The Death of a Pillow It’s raining. I despise the rain. My feet turn tight like sow bugs and I feel lightheaded from counting the ...

I had the notion of making a book. A physiological thriller of a mass murdering substitute, killing the students by the seat order in the class room. PLEASE read and ...

I stepped out and the cold hit me like a cement wall. I looked up, the mirror was fogged over, but I could see my ivory skin, pale and red ...

I could literally see what was going on in your writing, along with what the girl was thinking. I give it two thumbs up One for description, the other for ...

I don't like the way the whole thing is condensed into such a short piece of writing, yet covers so much of your character's lives...this could be expanded so much ...

This is an real event. Exaggerated, but real. Sweaty, big-boned, women with false hair and fans yelled “Hallelujah!” after the scripture reading. Grown men with tired, grimace lines hoot when ...

Before you review this, know that this was a HIGH SCHOOL PAPER that I wrote with a BOGUS PROMPT. It had to be short, and realistic...kinda. I couldn't be all ...

My goodness! Precious tears ran down my face when I read this. I loved the imagery. I was so into it. I also liked that you talked about the characters ...

That was one of the funniest stories I have ever read. I love how real a breakup can be. Your use of dialog is superb. :] keep up the good ...

This was an amazing first chapter. As I was reading, I could clearly see everything you were saying. The sarcasm, and realness of the piece is evident. :D Great job!