Leapy

Well I have to say I found this extremely hilarious!! Loved it just form the title, but even more so when I read the whole thing. I have to say ...

I really loved it. It was simple and yet still captivating. Wonderful job with linking the words together!! Very nice. She was beauty and he the beast, they were destined ...

Wow. Ok so I started this and intended to start going through carefully and pick out things here and there, but I got captivated and forgot what the hell I ...

Here's what I think, and yes, there are some small spoilers. [spoiler]Twilight, quite frankly is a poorly written series, spanning four books. All of them lack any literary "omph" so ...

I have to say with the short jumping around was a bit confusing, but after I got over that I found this really enjoyable. The only thing I really can ...

I LOVE the last two, they just make you realize exactly how much you miss on a ground level. They are really simple and yet beautiful. The cats are really ...

Here's where everything gets interesting... well for chapter 1 atleast! Enjoy. It also starts with my second main character. Zak didn't like it. No not one bit. He stood leaning ...

Irresistible, unconditional, irrevocable. That had to be my favorite part of the whole thing. It was a simple yet profound statement of exactly how truly there love was there. The ...

I will agree it is a bit easier to read then the last, although still not quite. The fact that you didn't capitalize a new sentence was sort of off ...

Hello, Leapy! Welcome to YWS! Before I say anything else, I'd like to remind you to read the rules and other stuff in the Help and Support section. We also ...

The style in which you wrote in this story really captured my attention. It was extremely well-written, balancing descriptions in the present, dialogue, thought, character description, and even throwi

Wow. That was really good. I'm actually really fond of Julian's attitude and determination- I hope you don't take that out as it progresses! He's a great character and I ...

So this is the first part(Of a two part chapter) I just wanted it to be a decent size to capture people's attention... All others to come will be longer. ...

Hahaha, wow I have to say the call to 911 had to be the funniest part. Great job. As far as something you wrote in one night based on a ...

I liked it. It really did capture the American high school setting. Ugh you make me remember mine.. bad things there. Anyways, I think you did an amazing job at ...