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Re: Questions For Your Face
It took me 16 years to find your face And now it seems that it’s misplaced My scene came up and I forgot my lines Someone filled in, you’re looks ...
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Daddy you're my hero
If you could retype this and try to put it in short lined stanzas that would be great but the story you have here is not too bad. Could reword ...
May 5, 2009 -
Re: A New Blood.
You presented the character with feelings that the reader could connect to and then in one fell swoop you make him the enemy. Amazing writing device you created here.
May 1, 2009 -
Re: A New Member Saying Hello
Hello I'm a new member. Just thought I'd let that be known. :D
May 1, 2009