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Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 36)
Leander here. Good use of description in language. It normally covers all of the bases needed to show not tell, so great on that. The description comes in well to ...
Jul 14, 2020 -
Re: The Silence in the Crowd
Leander here. This was a long read. Not necessarily a bad one, but it was a pinch too long for my liking. I see spaces for it to break up ...
Jul 14, 2020