Leahweird

Is it too late to join? I've read all the liruature, now I'd like to partake. Although I'm not positive how I'll work myself in.

I agree with LynnLynn for the most part. I want to add that your channeling InuYasha in your characters background and appearance. You should watch that, because if it's too ...

This is eally good, but only as a prolouge. It's very speeck-like, but I'm sure that's intentional. My only real critique is that you say "The older of the two" ...

I was completly drawn in. YOu have a great style, and some of the imagry was fantatic. This gave me shivers. I noticed in the first paragrapgh that he looks ...

Thankyou very much for your help. I decided to throw it in other, because of some of the subplots, although I do value you opinion mizz-iceberg.

The second chapter explains all, but she's eighteen. Thankyou for pointing out the error. That line was missing on my origional draft, so now I can't remember what went there!

This is the first scene in my first novel, which I am almost complete. There is some violence, but nothing too graphic. Enjoy! Reflections Chapter One I wasn’t sure what ...

This stated out well, but you have major grammar and spelling issues. Most of them are probably typos, but you should check that out. Also, I don't really see how ...

This is wondefully written. It works well as an opening scene, becase it draw's the reader in. I hope, though, that you will work in some of the mechanics of ...

Hopefully this story is still active. It looks like you still need a prince. Do you mind if I join in?

I still have no idea where to post my vampire story. Doues it go in fantasy, or science fiction?

Teehee, I'm having fun already. I was Jrid in elven PAradise by the way, in case anbody is interested. As for genres, I'll read just about anything, but I'm heavily ...

I went by the same thing as now, Leahweird, but I had to spell it Leah_Weird, because i had a previous account that i couldn't remember the password for.

Thank you so much! I'll probably just lurk for now, but I'll probably post something soon, just to get in the game. I can't believe I didn't find this place ...

This might seem odd, but I'm looking for members of The Young Writers Club, which was formally a popular site for young writers a lot like this one. I tried ...