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Re: Fear
I really liked this untill the second-last line. " for revenge for everything. This just didn't flow well, and everything else did. I'm not sure whats wrong with it, but ...
May 7, 2008 -
Re: Reflections Chapter Three
Chapter Three Of course, it wasn’t really a body. It was only Ambrose, but he looked so much more like a cadaver when he was asleep. Without the benefit of ...
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Re: The Ultimate Storybook (1)
This has been edited to better fit the plot. Name: Minerva Rivers Age: 22 Appearance: Long red brown hair that falls to the middle of her back. Short and lithe ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Back Fire Hell
~Autumn~ Autumn was siked. Apparently she'd picked the ecact right moment to reappear. SHe loved it when that happed, because often enough it didn't. "Oh, I am SO in," she ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Back Fire Hell
~Autumn~ She materialized in the middle of the street. She'd long since become accustomed to the return, but this time was even more drastic. For one, everything seemed to be ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Back Fire Hell
I hope it's not to late too join. I'm going to, and you can disregard this if you feel like it. Name: Autumn Sword Age: She’s been alive for twenty ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon Knight Legacy - Chronicle of Heros
(Don'y worry about me. As long as I make it in eventually, it can be anytime. I can't stand to disrupt the flow of everything just to join. I'll work ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: My Master, my Lover.
Wow this really is amsing, despite the lack of paragraph breaks. No one's comented on it, but there is an empty line after the shakespeare conversation that was most likely ...
May 6, 2008 -
Re: Reflections Chapter 2
That means alot coming from a fellow vamp fan
May 4, 2008 -
Re: What influenced you to write what you are writing right now?
My near-complete first novel Reflections was inspired by Storybooks. The whole thing sprang from a scene in an RPG on another website built by a keypal Dragonfire, and then I ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: what are some good villan names?
Nero is also a notorious roman emporer, so it does have evil contations, but probably not the type your going for.
May 2, 2008 -
Re: what are some good villan names?
Valentine doesn't have to be an evil name. I just finished a book in which the main hero holds that name. He's a sunny, caring person,kl and the name suits ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Reflections Chapter 2
Chapter Two We walked for fifteen minutes before I got bored. I know that sounds stupid. Here I was, walking beside a supernatural creature that just killed a guy from ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: The Dragon Knight Legacy - Chronicle of Heros
(Do you mind if I post a bio? It might give you an idea of how to work her in, and an oppurtunity to vito anything.) Name: Cassandra Age: 17 ...
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Re: Original things that became Cliche
Pretty much anything tolkien used. He's a paragon, but he had SO MUCH going on in his stories, he kinda used up every fantasy plot line there was. Oh! The ...
May 2, 2008
